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I'm using your reviewing system that you described on your page. And as such, 3.5 stars. I don't mean to put the track down as I feel it has immense potential, but as someone who goes to clubs frequently and knows what gets the crowd moving, the opening to the track seemed.... Muddy. By that I mean I felt as though the trance pluck and stabs were not complimenting eachother, and I don't mean the synths but the notes themselves.

Now I've heard Armin Van Buuren use a very similar stab to the one you used here to great success, but it wasn't used throughout the whole song, it was used as a buildup during transitions. I believe the track was in ASOT 2006 or 2007. Worth looking up for reference.

A pad complimenting the baseline here would have smoothed out the buildup in some areas and created more synergy throughout the track.

And as previously stated there were one or two areas where the transitions stumbled badly. In fact if I were dancing at the club I woulda assumed the dj screwed up and gone ,"come on bro!!".

Do not be discouraged though, I see where this track is going and I feel it has immense potential. Just gotta smooth out the rough edges a bit. I wanna see a MK.2 of this track!

Pulsar013 responds:

Hmm my methods works - more reviews! The opening track was super muddy - ur right about that. And ill admit the piece - was done a bit ruff could have gottten a little more mastering. I think a pad complimenting the bassline would be good - I think ill try that one. And really after the fact that I uploaded this - I felt some time mix ups - but decided to let'em be and move on - but Im likin ur advice and suggestions def goin to make some strives to get some more traks goin - thanx destroyerrrr.

I think it'll be great when it's full length like 3 min+, and truth be told probably closer to 5-6 min as that gives you leeway to mix into/out of another song. The beat is definitely a dubstep style beat, but the synth very dubstep, but as with all electronica there are so kany subgenres and they don't always fit it's probably best not to fret about it. Good job!

xTCGx responds:

Hey man thanks a lot, I really appreciate the feed back! But yes I understand what you mean about the song being to short, that is a problem I have a lot of the time Im always worried that certain sections of the song go on for to long so my songs always end up really short. xD Thanks again!!

Excellent! I am so looking forward to this project being finished. Have you been selected for the film? I like this accent better than the original and your second audio file. A monastic type voice for the inquisitor seems more appropriate than the other borderline russian accents I have heard. The age of the voicing seems spot on, with some younger voices, their youth shows through their acting, you do not seem to have any issue with this. Kudos.

Shadeborn responds:

Thank You, but no, I've not being selected). But I'm waiting the finished film to).

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